19 January 2012, 1:20 pm
I'm writing a story called "The Adventures of Billy the Hypnotist." It's about a young kid named Billy, who is an innocent kid for the most part, but from time to time can get into mischief. He lives with his sister, Katy, who just turned 16, and his mom. His sister is a bit of a brat, and is ALWAYS picking on Billy. His mother favors Katy, and Billy feels no one ever listens to what he wants. One day, while hiding from his family in his mom's closet he finds an unusual necklace, with a shiny crystal at the end of it. He gets an idea. He sneaks back downstairs where Katy and his mom are watching TV. He sneaks up behind them and starts swinging the necklace back and forth in front of them. Finally he snaps his fingers and his mom and sister go into a trance. He tells them they are now under his control, and they reply "Yes, Master." Anyway, I honestly have no idea where I'm going with this story, I've just been making it up as I go along. I am taking suggestions, as to what Billy should do next? Or what he makes his sister and his mom do? Thanks!... Read More »
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